Post by Mini Man on May 14, 2006 15:05:16 GMT -5
Hey if you've been taking part in the RPG classes on JetixTalk, then post your grades you got for the classes and you can even post your assignment too if you want to. The links to the thread in JT are where it says 'Assignment #: ??'
So far I have got B's for the first 4 assignments and my most recent was an A+ *GRINS*.
Here are my assignments:
Assignment 1: Character
Character: Sam - SPD Omega Ranger
Setting: His House In New Tech City
Sam awoke to the soft sound of the birds singing in the trees, his room was lit up by the sunlight that gleamed through his bedroom window. He opened his eyes but he could only squint because of the brightness of the sun. He could hear the engines of the cars driving past, and odd giggle from children being taken to school by their parents. Stretching, Sam sat up, resting against his pillow for comfort. He reached over to his bedside table and picked up his golden watch to check the time; it was six forty five A.M.
After admiring the view of the trees covered in pink and white blossom in the park for a few seconds, Sam swung his feet out from underneath the bed covers, and placed them inside his black furred 'monster foot-like' slippers. He yawned for a few seconds, then stood up whilst stretching his arms high in the air again. He then walked out of his bedroom, and slowly stepped down the staircase covered in a scarlet coloured carpet.
The sight of the morning's post greeted him as he reached the bottom of the staircase, but he ignored it for now, he had plenty of time before he was needed at the S.P.D Base. Sam followed the corridor and walked through the pinewood door into his wooded tiled kitchen. He grabbed a bowl from the cupboard on the upper section, and placed it on to the table that could seat six people in total. Next he took the almost empty Semi-Skimmed bottle of milk from the refrigerator, and then took the box of Crunchy Nut Cornflakes from the cupboard just to the left of the sink. He turned on the radio before pouring a large amount of cornflakes into his bowl at the table, and then gently poured the remaining milk from the bottle into the bowl as well.
After putting the now empty bottle of milk into the silver bin by the door, he grabbed a silver table spoon from the open draw that was just next to the fridge, and sat down at the table enjoying his bowl of Crunchy Nut Cornflakes.
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Assignment 2: Battle Field
Character: Sam - SPD Omega Ranger
Setting: New Tech City Park
Sam stood there morphed, surrounded by a large group of Krybots, Blueheads, and Orangeheads. He clenched his fists and watched in bewilderment as the minions of Grum took a circular formation around him, meaning the first movement that he made, they would strike. He continued to stare into their faces, waiting for them to make a move if they ever did. The park gave them a big advantage for space, Sam didn't know how he would get past them all. He spotted one of the Krybots make a sudden movement and he revved up his Omega Morpher while calling for a power mode, then all the bots started to charge at him, so he opened up his palm and slammed it into the ground.
The first group of Krybots running at him were blasted into the air as sparks and blue electrical energy almost completely absorbed their bodies before they landed on the ground. The trees seemed to block all the sunlight around and yet it was as light as any other day. Sam threw a few kicks and punches at some of the oncoming Krybots, and he noticed that the Orangeheads were directing traffic but just standing there watching Sam try to battle. Now some blueheads were getting involved now as Sam linked hands with one and pulled off a kind of circular kick to a few surrounding Krybots then threw the bluehead into another 3. Again, Sam revved his morpher up but called for electro mode this time and he ran around super fast, throwing punch after punch at lightning speeds, and then to finish the combo off, he delivered a super kick to an Orangehead.
Seeing another one of the bots go down the rest of the Orangeheads had had enough and lunged at Sam with their swords. One struck him over the chest causing sparks to fly around Sam. After a couple more slashes Sam was on the ground but got back up quickly, and then received another blow in the back this time from a bluehead. Sam played possum, lying on the ground pretending to be defeated, and the second the Orangehead took his eyes of him, Sam called for tornado mode on his omega morpher and a large gust of wind surged through all of the Krybots infront of him. They were mainly blue and orangeheads that were damaged which really made it easier for Sam to compete against the other Krybots. There were about 10 or so left so Sam charged at them with force. He delivered punches and kicks, until he got to the last one. He shoved his fist into the Krybots chest and pushed it forward whilst still advancing, thus taking out the other bots in one go, leaving the remaining one to get blasted. Sam called for power mode once again and the energy travelled through the ground blasting the Krybot high into the air where it exploded.
After checking that no one was around and that no more Krybots had come, he demorphed then walked back out of the park, breathing a sigh of relief.
**********
Assignment 3: Biographies
Character: Sam - SPD Omega Ranger
Name: Sam
Age: 20
Ranger/Villain Role: Omega S.P.D Ranger
Appearance: Sam has darkish/blonde looking hair, brown (hazel) coloured eyes. When not on patrol he likes to wear short sleeved t-shirts generally of one colour but he prefers white. He also has a black leather jacket. Usually, he prefers to wear blue or black jeans and sometimes he will wear a pair of jogging bottoms that are black and that have two white stripes going down the sides.
Zord: Omegamax Cycle
Height: 5"10'
Weight: 140lbs
Personality: Sam always likes to be adventurous and try new things, but he can sometimes get a little shy or embarassed.
History: When Sam was about ten years of age he was always being teased at school because of his genetic powers. His parents had worked for S.P.D and were involved in an accident when developing the technology that the rangers have today, that's why he is able to teleport things away.
As a child he was tricked by Mora into helping her get rid of the power rangers, but Z who had had the same problems as him when she was young, managed to convince him to be her friend, and Sam joined S.P.D. He would grow up and go through all the accademy training, eventually receiving the job as Omega Ranger, with his mentor as the Nova Ranger.
Sam travelled back in time to the year 2025 to stop Morgana, Shortie and Devastation. However he wasn't able to demorph into a human form, because when passing through the time portal, he became crystalized in pure light form. He then carried on battling beside the B-Squad power rangers and helping Kat Manx in developing new more powerful weapons for the ranger, until the final battle when his mentor Nova ranger came back in time looking for him. They helped to defeat the troobian empire and after succeeding, the travelled back to the future.
Weapon(s): Omega Morpher - Electro/Power/Tornado/Fire Mode
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Assignment 4: Setting
Character: Sam - SPD Omega Ranger
Setting: An empty unused room in SPD Base
Sam floated into a room that nobody used anymore. The time travel had tired him slightly but not that much. The room was square and looked like a store room, or possibly an old workshop for Kat Manx. The sky blue walls gleamed in the sunlight from outside which almost made it impossible for Sam to be seen. There was a large computer in one corner of the room that looked very similar to the database that SPD used in the future, but this one was much too small to be that one. The computer took up about two thirds of the room's height and roughly about a quarter of the room's width.
Like in every other room, there was the red light and the speaker next to it for when the rangers were needed, and Sam now noticed something else in the room aswell. Just next to the large computer, there were wires of many colours which had no meaning whatsoever to Sam, and then a synthesizer had appeared just next to him. As wierd as it seemed, this was infact the room where the broken pieces of equipment were stored until they could be repaired.
From the window's view, the S.P.D accademy could be seen being trained. There was the running track and the bright green grass shining in the sun's rays. Sam noticed the B-Squad power rangers training up the D-Squad in the simulation area, which much reminded Sam of the future's training facilities. Again, another new object had entered the room, this time it was what looked like a patrol morpher, but with silver writing instead of gold.
The alarm had gone off signalling the rangers presence, so Sam floated out of the room and into the main computer room where Kat was waiting.
**********
Assignment 5: Tradegy
Character: Sam - SPD Omega Ranger
Loss Of: Elizabeth "Z" Delgado {A Close Friend}
Setting: At his house in NewTech City >> Living Room >> 4:30AM
The light of the lampost, just outside Sam's house was simmering gently through his scarlet and yellow shaded curtains, the streets were silent, empty. Sam was sitting on his black leather sofa on the middle seat, head in his hands, and whispering the odd word every now and then. "How?" He was shaking all over, now shaking his head, as a single tear ran from his left eye, down his cheek, until finally dripping off his chin. Red vains could be seen almost completely covering the whites of his eyes, he had been up all night, and all through the morning. He had received a telephone call from one of 'Z's' closest friends (and flat mate): Syd (Sydney) Drew. He could feel the pain seizing up inside him.
It was around 12:00AM, and Sam had just got back from a party, that himself, along with Syd, Z, Bridge, Sky and Jack had been to. They'd had a great night. He'd left along with Z and Syd. They didn't really take too much to the idea of staying up all night/morning.
Back At His Home
He decided to relax for a little, to reflect on the night overall, and take time to 'warm down' from the enjoyment. He was just about to make his way into the kitchen to make a coffee before he retired for the night, when the phone had begun to ring. It was Syd. (Sam picturing in his mind) She sounded in a rush, as though something had really shocked her, and she was breathing heavily, almost sounding like she was crying. She'd explained about how Z had started to complain about a headache, so she had gone up to bed. She continued to go on about how she was just finishing in the bathroom, and walking down the corridor to her room. Z had begun to make wretching sounds, and when Syd had arrived to the scene, she was lying on the floor, clutching her stomache, vomitting blood all over the floor. Syd had grabbed the nearest phone to her, which was Z's mobile, and dialled 911, asking for an ambulance, they'd told her they'd be as quick as possible. Syd said that she'd tried to comfort Z, calm her, just to keep her OK, but she'd let out a bone chilling shriek of pain, and then... it was over. She was gone. The ambulance had arrived 2 minutes later, and took Z into hospital to be examined. (End of vision)
Sam had now picked up the golden necklace that Z had bought him when he was 13. It was similar to the one she had got only this one was shaped like an 'S' but with more straight/diagonal/pointed lines. She clenched it tight in the palm of his hand, making a fist that bulged into a dark red colour. He released the grip of the necklace and tied it around his neck, then stood up and gazed out of the center gap of his curtains, viewing the empty street, lit up by the few street lamps at regular points. His eyes were still watering, as yet another tear dripped off the edge of his chin. Sam closed his eyes tightly and re-opened them. He grabbed his newly bought jacket, from the end of the sofa, and walked pacily through the front door, locking it behind him.
I've got to say goodbye properly. He thought.
**********
This is the comment I received from Titanium Ranger:
'Hey Mini Man
Awesome post man! You've outdone yourself with this one. Great effort and your forty-five minutes didn't go to waste lol. Making the readers feel for you is an essential part and you did it. Nice description, a bit gruesome as it was. Can't grade you less than an A+'
So far I have got B's for the first 4 assignments and my most recent was an A+ *GRINS*.
Here are my assignments:
Assignment 1: Character
Character: Sam - SPD Omega Ranger
Setting: His House In New Tech City
Sam awoke to the soft sound of the birds singing in the trees, his room was lit up by the sunlight that gleamed through his bedroom window. He opened his eyes but he could only squint because of the brightness of the sun. He could hear the engines of the cars driving past, and odd giggle from children being taken to school by their parents. Stretching, Sam sat up, resting against his pillow for comfort. He reached over to his bedside table and picked up his golden watch to check the time; it was six forty five A.M.
After admiring the view of the trees covered in pink and white blossom in the park for a few seconds, Sam swung his feet out from underneath the bed covers, and placed them inside his black furred 'monster foot-like' slippers. He yawned for a few seconds, then stood up whilst stretching his arms high in the air again. He then walked out of his bedroom, and slowly stepped down the staircase covered in a scarlet coloured carpet.
The sight of the morning's post greeted him as he reached the bottom of the staircase, but he ignored it for now, he had plenty of time before he was needed at the S.P.D Base. Sam followed the corridor and walked through the pinewood door into his wooded tiled kitchen. He grabbed a bowl from the cupboard on the upper section, and placed it on to the table that could seat six people in total. Next he took the almost empty Semi-Skimmed bottle of milk from the refrigerator, and then took the box of Crunchy Nut Cornflakes from the cupboard just to the left of the sink. He turned on the radio before pouring a large amount of cornflakes into his bowl at the table, and then gently poured the remaining milk from the bottle into the bowl as well.
After putting the now empty bottle of milk into the silver bin by the door, he grabbed a silver table spoon from the open draw that was just next to the fridge, and sat down at the table enjoying his bowl of Crunchy Nut Cornflakes.
**********
Assignment 2: Battle Field
Character: Sam - SPD Omega Ranger
Setting: New Tech City Park
Sam stood there morphed, surrounded by a large group of Krybots, Blueheads, and Orangeheads. He clenched his fists and watched in bewilderment as the minions of Grum took a circular formation around him, meaning the first movement that he made, they would strike. He continued to stare into their faces, waiting for them to make a move if they ever did. The park gave them a big advantage for space, Sam didn't know how he would get past them all. He spotted one of the Krybots make a sudden movement and he revved up his Omega Morpher while calling for a power mode, then all the bots started to charge at him, so he opened up his palm and slammed it into the ground.
The first group of Krybots running at him were blasted into the air as sparks and blue electrical energy almost completely absorbed their bodies before they landed on the ground. The trees seemed to block all the sunlight around and yet it was as light as any other day. Sam threw a few kicks and punches at some of the oncoming Krybots, and he noticed that the Orangeheads were directing traffic but just standing there watching Sam try to battle. Now some blueheads were getting involved now as Sam linked hands with one and pulled off a kind of circular kick to a few surrounding Krybots then threw the bluehead into another 3. Again, Sam revved his morpher up but called for electro mode this time and he ran around super fast, throwing punch after punch at lightning speeds, and then to finish the combo off, he delivered a super kick to an Orangehead.
Seeing another one of the bots go down the rest of the Orangeheads had had enough and lunged at Sam with their swords. One struck him over the chest causing sparks to fly around Sam. After a couple more slashes Sam was on the ground but got back up quickly, and then received another blow in the back this time from a bluehead. Sam played possum, lying on the ground pretending to be defeated, and the second the Orangehead took his eyes of him, Sam called for tornado mode on his omega morpher and a large gust of wind surged through all of the Krybots infront of him. They were mainly blue and orangeheads that were damaged which really made it easier for Sam to compete against the other Krybots. There were about 10 or so left so Sam charged at them with force. He delivered punches and kicks, until he got to the last one. He shoved his fist into the Krybots chest and pushed it forward whilst still advancing, thus taking out the other bots in one go, leaving the remaining one to get blasted. Sam called for power mode once again and the energy travelled through the ground blasting the Krybot high into the air where it exploded.
After checking that no one was around and that no more Krybots had come, he demorphed then walked back out of the park, breathing a sigh of relief.
**********
Assignment 3: Biographies
Character: Sam - SPD Omega Ranger
Name: Sam
Age: 20
Ranger/Villain Role: Omega S.P.D Ranger
Appearance: Sam has darkish/blonde looking hair, brown (hazel) coloured eyes. When not on patrol he likes to wear short sleeved t-shirts generally of one colour but he prefers white. He also has a black leather jacket. Usually, he prefers to wear blue or black jeans and sometimes he will wear a pair of jogging bottoms that are black and that have two white stripes going down the sides.
Zord: Omegamax Cycle
Height: 5"10'
Weight: 140lbs
Personality: Sam always likes to be adventurous and try new things, but he can sometimes get a little shy or embarassed.
History: When Sam was about ten years of age he was always being teased at school because of his genetic powers. His parents had worked for S.P.D and were involved in an accident when developing the technology that the rangers have today, that's why he is able to teleport things away.
As a child he was tricked by Mora into helping her get rid of the power rangers, but Z who had had the same problems as him when she was young, managed to convince him to be her friend, and Sam joined S.P.D. He would grow up and go through all the accademy training, eventually receiving the job as Omega Ranger, with his mentor as the Nova Ranger.
Sam travelled back in time to the year 2025 to stop Morgana, Shortie and Devastation. However he wasn't able to demorph into a human form, because when passing through the time portal, he became crystalized in pure light form. He then carried on battling beside the B-Squad power rangers and helping Kat Manx in developing new more powerful weapons for the ranger, until the final battle when his mentor Nova ranger came back in time looking for him. They helped to defeat the troobian empire and after succeeding, the travelled back to the future.
Weapon(s): Omega Morpher - Electro/Power/Tornado/Fire Mode
**********
Assignment 4: Setting
Character: Sam - SPD Omega Ranger
Setting: An empty unused room in SPD Base
Sam floated into a room that nobody used anymore. The time travel had tired him slightly but not that much. The room was square and looked like a store room, or possibly an old workshop for Kat Manx. The sky blue walls gleamed in the sunlight from outside which almost made it impossible for Sam to be seen. There was a large computer in one corner of the room that looked very similar to the database that SPD used in the future, but this one was much too small to be that one. The computer took up about two thirds of the room's height and roughly about a quarter of the room's width.
Like in every other room, there was the red light and the speaker next to it for when the rangers were needed, and Sam now noticed something else in the room aswell. Just next to the large computer, there were wires of many colours which had no meaning whatsoever to Sam, and then a synthesizer had appeared just next to him. As wierd as it seemed, this was infact the room where the broken pieces of equipment were stored until they could be repaired.
From the window's view, the S.P.D accademy could be seen being trained. There was the running track and the bright green grass shining in the sun's rays. Sam noticed the B-Squad power rangers training up the D-Squad in the simulation area, which much reminded Sam of the future's training facilities. Again, another new object had entered the room, this time it was what looked like a patrol morpher, but with silver writing instead of gold.
The alarm had gone off signalling the rangers presence, so Sam floated out of the room and into the main computer room where Kat was waiting.
**********
Assignment 5: Tradegy
Character: Sam - SPD Omega Ranger
Loss Of: Elizabeth "Z" Delgado {A Close Friend}
Setting: At his house in NewTech City >> Living Room >> 4:30AM
The light of the lampost, just outside Sam's house was simmering gently through his scarlet and yellow shaded curtains, the streets were silent, empty. Sam was sitting on his black leather sofa on the middle seat, head in his hands, and whispering the odd word every now and then. "How?" He was shaking all over, now shaking his head, as a single tear ran from his left eye, down his cheek, until finally dripping off his chin. Red vains could be seen almost completely covering the whites of his eyes, he had been up all night, and all through the morning. He had received a telephone call from one of 'Z's' closest friends (and flat mate): Syd (Sydney) Drew. He could feel the pain seizing up inside him.
~FLASHBACK BEGINS~
It was around 12:00AM, and Sam had just got back from a party, that himself, along with Syd, Z, Bridge, Sky and Jack had been to. They'd had a great night. He'd left along with Z and Syd. They didn't really take too much to the idea of staying up all night/morning.
Back At His Home
He decided to relax for a little, to reflect on the night overall, and take time to 'warm down' from the enjoyment. He was just about to make his way into the kitchen to make a coffee before he retired for the night, when the phone had begun to ring. It was Syd. (Sam picturing in his mind) She sounded in a rush, as though something had really shocked her, and she was breathing heavily, almost sounding like she was crying. She'd explained about how Z had started to complain about a headache, so she had gone up to bed. She continued to go on about how she was just finishing in the bathroom, and walking down the corridor to her room. Z had begun to make wretching sounds, and when Syd had arrived to the scene, she was lying on the floor, clutching her stomache, vomitting blood all over the floor. Syd had grabbed the nearest phone to her, which was Z's mobile, and dialled 911, asking for an ambulance, they'd told her they'd be as quick as possible. Syd said that she'd tried to comfort Z, calm her, just to keep her OK, but she'd let out a bone chilling shriek of pain, and then... it was over. She was gone. The ambulance had arrived 2 minutes later, and took Z into hospital to be examined. (End of vision)
~FLASHBACK ENDS~
Sam had now picked up the golden necklace that Z had bought him when he was 13. It was similar to the one she had got only this one was shaped like an 'S' but with more straight/diagonal/pointed lines. She clenched it tight in the palm of his hand, making a fist that bulged into a dark red colour. He released the grip of the necklace and tied it around his neck, then stood up and gazed out of the center gap of his curtains, viewing the empty street, lit up by the few street lamps at regular points. His eyes were still watering, as yet another tear dripped off the edge of his chin. Sam closed his eyes tightly and re-opened them. He grabbed his newly bought jacket, from the end of the sofa, and walked pacily through the front door, locking it behind him.
I've got to say goodbye properly. He thought.
**********
This is the comment I received from Titanium Ranger:
'Hey Mini Man
Awesome post man! You've outdone yourself with this one. Great effort and your forty-five minutes didn't go to waste lol. Making the readers feel for you is an essential part and you did it. Nice description, a bit gruesome as it was. Can't grade you less than an A+'