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Post by Red Mystic Ranger on May 3, 2006 19:23:31 GMT -5
Yes, I'm going to start that. From now on, new episode will be posted on Monday's and Fridays. Previews will be availible the say before, and spoilers the day after. So, this Friday the first episode is coming out.
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Post by Mini Man on May 3, 2006 19:26:17 GMT -5
I think you meant third episode?
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Post by Red Mystic Ranger on May 3, 2006 19:27:44 GMT -5
right. sorry.
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Post by Mini Man on May 3, 2006 20:12:57 GMT -5
no problem, there's no need to be sorry lol.
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Post by Red Mystic Ranger on May 4, 2006 13:45:21 GMT -5
Ok. Then, not sorry
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Post by Red Mystic Ranger on May 5, 2006 6:33:26 GMT -5
He tripped and fell as the tall figure traveled through the ragged, rough, and rocky forest. He checked his sensors again. Still the same, nothing. It was going to be a very long day.
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"Hey, Kim" Amanda said as she walked into Discovery-Tech. "Have you seen Cathy? I can't find her anywhere"
"She's reading in her car outside of my house, I think. I'm pretty sure she came here to ask me something, but she got caught up in her book." Kimberly Replied.
"Ok, thanks. I'll be back here in a minute" Amanda said, and ran back outside to Cathy's Jeep.
Outside, Kimberly was right. Sitting in her car, Cathy was reading a book. Amanda went over to her and interrupted, "Cathy, I've been trying to contact you all day."
"Oops, sorry" Cathy replied, "I got so caught up in my book that I didn't want any distractions, so I turned my morpher off"
"Don't do it again. There may be a time when we'll need your help on the battlefield" Amanda's morpher beeped, "Like now"
Five minutes later, Amanda, Cathy, Troy, and Andrew were standing morphed in front of a short figure that looked like an oversized teddy bear.
"Oh, he's so cute!" Cathy exclaimed.
"But not what we're here for" Troy said. "Hey, where's Ryan?" he continued after noticing that there were only four rangers.
"I don't know, but we can take this guy without him" Amanda said enthusiastically. "Let's fight!"
The others echoed, "Alright!"
"Not so fast, rangers." The teddy-bear monster said. "I have a few tricks up my sleeve that that foolish other monster you beat didn't have."
"Like what?" Andrew asked.
"Like this!" The teddy-bear monster said as he sent some blue bowties form his chest towards the four rangers. When the bowties got close, they exploded, pushing the four off their feet.
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"Uhh" he moaned after tripping over a damp log, right into a puddle of mud. Cuts and bruises were everywhere on his body, form forehead to toe. He had been out for hours searching, but still, nothing. He walked further. Suddenly, his sensors picked up something. He was getting close. Very close. He walked behind a huge boulder where he sae a small box about the size of a board game.
"Looking for something, Red Ranger?" A voice from behind the man said. He picked the box up and turned around. In front of him stood a figure that was bulky, red, and had something that looked like a viking's hat on his head. Also, The teeth on his chest and arms looked threatening.
"Who...Who are you?" Ryan asked the figure.
"I'm your doom" he replied. "I'm going to do anything I can to get that box, if it means killing you, which Yonko is making me do anyway"
"Oh, so you work for Yonko, huh? Well, you're not getting by me"
"Oh yeah?" The monster asked "Maybe not, but some Dragonspikes might!" He threw a red cube into the air. In midair, it broke open and about thirty short red figures that looked like dragons with about twenty more spikes jumped out. "Oh, god" Ryan said.
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"Is that all you got?" Amanda said as she got up.
"Nope" The teddy-bear monster said "I've got more"
This time, he put his hands into the air and an orb of energy grew in each palm. He threw them towards the rangers, who fell down again. As they got up, the four decided it was time to attack instead of be attacked. Andrew and Troy held Amanda up on their arms and she jumped up and kicked the Teddy-bear monster. However, the teddy-bear monster was prepared. When Amanda kicked him she got shocked by the electricity that he had built up in his stomach. "This is not good" Cathy said "Not good at all.
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The Dragonspikes hissed loudly. Ryan held the box in his hand and prepared to fight. He ran and kicked two Dragonspikes in the stomach, and then punched two more. Four down. Twenty-six to go. He ran towards a group of about 5 and grabbed one of them. He then used that one to knock the others down. A group of about seven came towards him and knocked Ryan against the tree. He then used the tree for support to kick them all down.
Ten minutes later, after defeating all of the Dragonspikes, Ryan was worn out.
"To be polite" The monster said, "I might as well tell you my name before you die"
"Then what is it?" Ryan asked.
"Dragonteeth. Your friends will be seeing me a lot. Now, give me the box"
"No." Ryan said coldly. "I won't"
"Then I'll just have to take it from you"
"Not if I can help it! Discovery Squad Red, Power Up!" Ryan said as he morphed into the red ranger. After the morph was complete, he opened the box and took out a red sphere. He placed it on his belt, just like Kimberly had told him to, and pressed the button on it. A tool shaped like a Javelin appeared in midair, and he caught it. He went up to Dragonspike and hit him several times with it, forcing him down to the ground. When Dragonspike recovered, Ryan pushed the other button on the sphere and the Javeline-like tool, he decided to call it the "Discovery Staff", disappeared and a blaster appeared in one hand, which Kimberly told him to call the 'Doublestriker". He blasted it at Dragonspike and then switched it to it's second mode: Sword Mode. He hit Dragonspike in the chest and then said "My doom, huh?" and ran away.
After he'd ran about a mile, he decided to tell Kimberly he had been successful.
"Nice Job" Kimberly said after hearing the news, "But your friends need you.
"Ok, I'll be with them in a minute. Bye" Ryan said as he closed his morpher. Then, he started to sprint to go save his friends.
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"This is not good" Troy said as he stood up. Suddenly, there was a flash of red light and then, between the rangers and the Teddy-Bear monster, Ryan appeared, morphed.
"I heard you guys needed some help" he said, "Take these. You'll know what to do". Ryan threw four spheres at the rangers, which they caught and put on their belt and pushed the button, just like Ryan had done. A circular weapon that resembled a jet's turbine appeared on Troy's left arm. In front of Andrew a giant hammer appeared. Amanda had something that looked like a bulldozer's bucket on both of her hands, and Cathy now held a big blaster. Ryan joined them with his Discovery Staff. Now it was time for them to attack. Amanda went first as she hit the monster with her Discovery Buckets, forcing him off balance. Next, it was Troy's turn. He pushed a button on his Discovery Turbine and a blast of wind knocked the Teddy-bear monster off his feet again. Now, Ryan, Cathy, and Andrew had their approach. Ryan threw his Discovery Staff at the monster's stomach, while Cathy shot him with her Discovery Blaster, and Andrew was hitting him with his hammer. Suddenly, the Monster exploded into a million cotton pieces.
"Yeah!" They all screamed.
Later on, Everybody had to ask Kimberly a few questions. Troy started, "How did you know that the spheres would be in that spot?"
"Well," Kimberly replied. "When I was a ranger my friends and I found those and hid them there for future rangers, like you"
"It's party time!" Andrew screamed as he put the music on full blast.
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Yonko was not happy. The rangers had survived yet another one of his monsters. Dragonteeth entered the room, and Yonko went up to him, furious. "Why didn't you kill the Red Ranger!" he screamed.
"I couldn't, sir, he was too powerful" Dragonteeth replied, oviously scared that the tall Yonko in black robes and his bull-like body would hurt him. "I'll kill all of them next time"
"You better. Or else you might not see light again!" Yonko screamed.
"Sir," Dragonteeth replied, "I did manage to get one of the sphere's in that box"
Yonko grunted, "Which one?"
"Well, It's not a weapon, sir, but once out monsters die, it can make them come back to like again, only bigger."
Yonko grunted again, "Maybe you are useful. I'll let you stick around...for now"
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I really hope everyone liked this episode! I took about twice as long on it, and I think it shows. Not only is longer than the other ones, but I tried to add more detail. The next episode should be about the same length, but with more detail. Please post suggestions and comments!
REMEMBER: Spoilers are coming tomorrow and a preview of episode 4 is coming Sunday.
Next time on Power Rangers Discovery Squad
The rangers have a BIG problem. How are they going to fight their new gigantic foe? Find out next time on Power Rangers Discovery Squad!
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Post by Mini Man on May 5, 2006 12:01:09 GMT -5
Well done it's great. I'm just curious though about why the 'past' rangers would put a sphere in there to make the monsters giant. If i'm not supposed to know yet then don't worry I'd rather wait for it to appear in the story. Overall there's not much improvement needed, only the surroundings again really but apart from that i think it's fine.
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Post by Red Mystic Ranger on May 5, 2006 18:47:06 GMT -5
Thanks, I'll keep it secret for now, if you don't mind
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Post by Red Mystic Ranger on May 6, 2006 10:08:29 GMT -5
It's Spoiler Day!
-Once the Mystic Force Solar Ranger and the 6th Boukenger Ranger is introduced, I will set up a Mystic Force Discovery Squad teamup episode.
-Once the rangers get their zords, they will be going all around the world to look for weapons and other things.
-I will soon introduce more of Yonkos generals, and one of them will go solo during the series.
Ok, that's all for now. I'll stick to 3 spoilers every spoiler day. Bye!
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Post by Mini Man on May 6, 2006 11:14:27 GMT -5
Cool sounds OK to me. Is there a name for the next episode?
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Post by Red Mystic Ranger on May 6, 2006 13:32:40 GMT -5
Not Yet. There will be tomorrow when I send outn the preview of the episode.
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Post by Mini Man on May 6, 2006 20:05:24 GMT -5
ok. I'm sure i can wait that long lol. Good luck!
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Post by Red Mystic Ranger on May 7, 2006 7:21:54 GMT -5
I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to change the dates of the episode releases. Friday and monday is just too much to make a good episode. I'm going to change the dates to Fridays only so I can make the Episodes the best theat I can. Sorry.
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Post by Mini Man on May 9, 2006 10:26:48 GMT -5
I don't know where the post before went so feel free to delete this one.
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Post by Tazz Davis on May 9, 2006 10:45:17 GMT -5
Please limit conversation in fic thread....if you wish to converse about the fic create a Q and A thread. MINIMAN you have been told about this before. RMR what you have said about going to once a week is fine...I just ask that you try to limit the conversation...it helps with the flow of the story.
as to you going to once a week i think your doing the right thing. I know that even with my once a week schedual i dont always get the episodes done. I am in way glad to see that you want to create better episodes...remember you have a year to do 32 or so episodes so take your time and do them the best you can....but then again you dont have to pull off the same number of episodes as the show does.
~thanks
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