Post by Phazon Ranger on May 31, 2006 2:57:36 GMT -5
This is my Fanfic which I have worked on for a pretty long time off and on, I have about 12ish chapters in various stages of completion. I am gonna try and finish this this summer. As you might have seen I have posted this on JT, but the you dont get much feedback, so Thats what I really want to get. Your opinions, comments and suggestions on it.
Thanks,
-Phazon
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Prologue:
In the days before man had rational thought, before he could make fire, tools and reason; there lived a race of beings, known as the Aní. These peoples were a warrior race of human like creatures, though far superior to what we were then. They lived in tribes, separate from each other, though how intelligent and smart they were, they were still a warring race.
These tribes were over looked by a mystical, god-like beast, the Animas they were called, looked over and protected their tribe and gave them power. Each of the tribe’s warriors would channel the Anima’s power to themselves, and they would become very mighty. Though, only the ones who could have a deep connection with the Animas would become the most powerful of leaders.
Once, in the last days of the Aní, there was a true leader, a true warrior that led the winged tribe of Aní. She was a powerful leader that considered her Anima a personal friend, instead of fearing and cowering under them, as so many leaders had done before. She had a grave and beauty that reflected itself on the battle field, but even as skilled and powerful a warrior she was, under her reign there was a unified peace. All of the Aní, and even those who weren’t of her tribe, looked up to her and respected her, and she created a unification of all the tribes, so that all of the leaders ruled together and their tribes were as one.
In these days the Anima were closer to them, as never before, and they freely trusted the Aní with their powers.
The end of the peace came with a rapid war of fire and darkness that engulfed all of the Aní into bloody battle. A tribe of Aní long ago, if they could be called Aní, separated themselves from the rest, they abandoned their Anima, and they relied upon themselves, and thought of themselves as Gods. When they left, they fled to a solitary island and created extravagant works of technology that surpassed even the Aní. These traitors’ names were the Scelus. Many generations later, the philosopher Plato would write about them as the Atlantians, and how their island was engulfed by the ocean.
They lived for many centuries separated from the Aní, not fighting them, but teaching their children that they were idiotic fools, who worshiped unreal spirits. They lived evil lives of demonic worship and self delusion. One day, the spirits must have had enough, but they engulfed the Scelus in their own demons, and turned them into evil spirits, women, children, and all were now demonic spirits of all colors shapes and sizes, but they were united in an effort to kill all who made them this way, and they blamed the Aní. They went out and inhabited bodies of all kinds of giants and monsters to face the Aní.
On the eve of the dark war, the Scelus attacked an Aní village that was inhabited by many families, women, and children. They killed them mercilessly .This sent the Aní warrior and the Scelus demons into a war that would virtually wipe out everything on the face of the earth.
Only the determination of the Aní leaders drove them through it, so they could defeat the Scelus.
They could not kill the Scelus demons but using the strength of the Animas they sealed them away for what was to be an eternity. This cost them their powers and their lives, for they could not exist without the Scelus. They had formed a bond of their souls, but they did it to let their children, humanity, live and be prosperous. Only knowing that one day, even if it took until the end of time, would come when they would be reborn, along with the Scelus
Characters:
Hawk Aníranger:
Byrd Tyrone
Age 17
Blonde hair
Green eyes
She is a strong heart, a little dunce sometimes, but comes out on top.
She had lived with her parents until the Demons attacked her village
and she became the Hawk Aníranger. Is supposed to be the reborn
spirit of the winged Aní, she is being revealed things about her past
very slowly.
Tiger Aníranger:
Adam Wuil
Age 19
Brown hair
Brown Eyes
A strong fearless leader; does not want to give the leadership to Byrd.
Is a bit big headed sometimes but is a loveable brute. Like most of the
Anírangers has a mysterious past, and doesn’t want to share much of it.
Is supposed to be the reborn spirit of the strong Aní, he is being revealed
things about his past gradually.
Wolf Aníranger:
Nick Relounet
Age 19
Grey Hair
Silver Eyes
A fun loving hearty type of guy, is a true loud mouth, but will stick up for
the little man. Is sometimes foolhardy and disobeys orders, but is a fighter
to the end. Is supposed to be the reborn spirit of the swift Aní, he is
being revealed things about his past gradually.
Shark Aníranger:
Natalie Ayu
Age 18
Black Hair
Brown Eyes
She is just like her Anima; she will stand around not do anything then out of
Nowhere, bite your head off. She is a fierce warrior with a hatred of her foe,
And a heart for her friends. She is the hard fighter, and a true team mate, she
Is athletic, and compassionate. She is a good friend. Is supposed to be the reborn
spirit of the swimmer Aní, she is being revealed things about her past gradually.
Bat Aníranger
Dante Kowlos
Age 18
Black Hair
Blue Eyes
He is primarily a loner, but has a warrior’s heart. He has a deeply troubled past,
but he will not talk about it. He likes to be by himself, but he will show his true
feelings in times of need. Is supposed to be the reborn spirit of the stealth Aní,
he is being revealed things about his past gradually.
The Scelus
Lord Kre-Nai-Zu:
The leader of the Scelus, he controls hordes of demons in the palm of his hand.
He inhabits the body of an 18 foot giant, which resides in a magnificent palace
on top of a mountain in what used to be the Andes mountains.
Gael:
A high ranking demon who serves Lord Kre-Nai-Zu. He has been put in charge
of all of Kre’s Military affairs. He is only the first of many generals in this Empire.
Demons:
Souls who have been turned into evil Scelus, they all serve Lord Kre. The come in
all shapes and sizes and can inhabit the bodies of living beings.
After the Aní sealed the Scelus away, they slept in hiding for millions of years.
In the year 2068 they returned to the world. They easily conquered the powers of
Man and condemned them to live of servitude. They took all of humanity’s technology
and horded it among themselves, fascinated of what they themselves had not created.
Unknown by the Scelus, when they escaped the seal, they also set free the
souls of the Aní warriors. The Scelus have ruled over humanity for 20 years. While
the reborn Aní wait for their new bodies to grow.
Thanks,
-Phazon
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Aníranger
Pt 1
The Aní
Pt 1
The Aní
Prologue:
In the days before man had rational thought, before he could make fire, tools and reason; there lived a race of beings, known as the Aní. These peoples were a warrior race of human like creatures, though far superior to what we were then. They lived in tribes, separate from each other, though how intelligent and smart they were, they were still a warring race.
These tribes were over looked by a mystical, god-like beast, the Animas they were called, looked over and protected their tribe and gave them power. Each of the tribe’s warriors would channel the Anima’s power to themselves, and they would become very mighty. Though, only the ones who could have a deep connection with the Animas would become the most powerful of leaders.
Once, in the last days of the Aní, there was a true leader, a true warrior that led the winged tribe of Aní. She was a powerful leader that considered her Anima a personal friend, instead of fearing and cowering under them, as so many leaders had done before. She had a grave and beauty that reflected itself on the battle field, but even as skilled and powerful a warrior she was, under her reign there was a unified peace. All of the Aní, and even those who weren’t of her tribe, looked up to her and respected her, and she created a unification of all the tribes, so that all of the leaders ruled together and their tribes were as one.
In these days the Anima were closer to them, as never before, and they freely trusted the Aní with their powers.
The end of the peace came with a rapid war of fire and darkness that engulfed all of the Aní into bloody battle. A tribe of Aní long ago, if they could be called Aní, separated themselves from the rest, they abandoned their Anima, and they relied upon themselves, and thought of themselves as Gods. When they left, they fled to a solitary island and created extravagant works of technology that surpassed even the Aní. These traitors’ names were the Scelus. Many generations later, the philosopher Plato would write about them as the Atlantians, and how their island was engulfed by the ocean.
They lived for many centuries separated from the Aní, not fighting them, but teaching their children that they were idiotic fools, who worshiped unreal spirits. They lived evil lives of demonic worship and self delusion. One day, the spirits must have had enough, but they engulfed the Scelus in their own demons, and turned them into evil spirits, women, children, and all were now demonic spirits of all colors shapes and sizes, but they were united in an effort to kill all who made them this way, and they blamed the Aní. They went out and inhabited bodies of all kinds of giants and monsters to face the Aní.
On the eve of the dark war, the Scelus attacked an Aní village that was inhabited by many families, women, and children. They killed them mercilessly .This sent the Aní warrior and the Scelus demons into a war that would virtually wipe out everything on the face of the earth.
Only the determination of the Aní leaders drove them through it, so they could defeat the Scelus.
They could not kill the Scelus demons but using the strength of the Animas they sealed them away for what was to be an eternity. This cost them their powers and their lives, for they could not exist without the Scelus. They had formed a bond of their souls, but they did it to let their children, humanity, live and be prosperous. Only knowing that one day, even if it took until the end of time, would come when they would be reborn, along with the Scelus
Overview
Characters:
Hawk Aníranger:
Byrd Tyrone
Age 17
Blonde hair
Green eyes
She is a strong heart, a little dunce sometimes, but comes out on top.
She had lived with her parents until the Demons attacked her village
and she became the Hawk Aníranger. Is supposed to be the reborn
spirit of the winged Aní, she is being revealed things about her past
very slowly.
Tiger Aníranger:
Adam Wuil
Age 19
Brown hair
Brown Eyes
A strong fearless leader; does not want to give the leadership to Byrd.
Is a bit big headed sometimes but is a loveable brute. Like most of the
Anírangers has a mysterious past, and doesn’t want to share much of it.
Is supposed to be the reborn spirit of the strong Aní, he is being revealed
things about his past gradually.
Wolf Aníranger:
Nick Relounet
Age 19
Grey Hair
Silver Eyes
A fun loving hearty type of guy, is a true loud mouth, but will stick up for
the little man. Is sometimes foolhardy and disobeys orders, but is a fighter
to the end. Is supposed to be the reborn spirit of the swift Aní, he is
being revealed things about his past gradually.
Shark Aníranger:
Natalie Ayu
Age 18
Black Hair
Brown Eyes
She is just like her Anima; she will stand around not do anything then out of
Nowhere, bite your head off. She is a fierce warrior with a hatred of her foe,
And a heart for her friends. She is the hard fighter, and a true team mate, she
Is athletic, and compassionate. She is a good friend. Is supposed to be the reborn
spirit of the swimmer Aní, she is being revealed things about her past gradually.
Bat Aníranger
Dante Kowlos
Age 18
Black Hair
Blue Eyes
He is primarily a loner, but has a warrior’s heart. He has a deeply troubled past,
but he will not talk about it. He likes to be by himself, but he will show his true
feelings in times of need. Is supposed to be the reborn spirit of the stealth Aní,
he is being revealed things about his past gradually.
The Scelus
Lord Kre-Nai-Zu:
The leader of the Scelus, he controls hordes of demons in the palm of his hand.
He inhabits the body of an 18 foot giant, which resides in a magnificent palace
on top of a mountain in what used to be the Andes mountains.
Gael:
A high ranking demon who serves Lord Kre-Nai-Zu. He has been put in charge
of all of Kre’s Military affairs. He is only the first of many generals in this Empire.
Demons:
Souls who have been turned into evil Scelus, they all serve Lord Kre. The come in
all shapes and sizes and can inhabit the bodies of living beings.
After the Aní sealed the Scelus away, they slept in hiding for millions of years.
In the year 2068 they returned to the world. They easily conquered the powers of
Man and condemned them to live of servitude. They took all of humanity’s technology
and horded it among themselves, fascinated of what they themselves had not created.
Unknown by the Scelus, when they escaped the seal, they also set free the
souls of the Aní warriors. The Scelus have ruled over humanity for 20 years. While
the reborn Aní wait for their new bodies to grow.